Eternal Gift: page 12

September 18th, 2009, 6:58 am

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Reply zelda99, September 17th, 2009, 11:02 pm

Grammar ? grammar/typo correction on any of my pages...highly welcome...

Thanks a lot ^__^ !

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Reply Theaex, September 18th, 2009, 7:05 am

Yay a page....DANCES IN JOY.
It's sooo kawaii and adorable...Love it

Reply Yori Hayashi Chan, September 18th, 2009, 1:29 pm

Her first sentence in the last panel is slightly awkward, but there aren't any actual errors from what I see. And he looks very cute in that third panel. Hehe! I really like his personality!

Reply NekoKira, September 18th, 2009, 1:57 pm

Aww... ^-^

Reply Seedless-acorn, September 18th, 2009, 4:01 pm

oo i likes the changes to the site, *looks around* and i'm a little surprised that he doesn't know the priest since it's a Poseidon temple... but lol s'ok xD She's so adorable xD <3

Reply KizzieSama, September 18th, 2009, 5:46 pm

Liking this new layout, and the new page of course :D Can't wait to read on!

Reply *Suki*, September 18th, 2009, 6:05 pm

XD She's too adorable! <3

Reply GoldenGossamer, September 18th, 2009, 6:59 pm

AAaaawww!!! x3 Love the new layout! AND THE PAGE! They're both too cute!! <3

Reply Glori, September 18th, 2009, 10:50 pm

Another lovely page :)

Nothing is wrong with your grammar or spelling, but the 1st and last panel would read more fluidly if it were *you're* instead of *you are* and *he's* instead of *he is*.

Reply Maddisen, September 19th, 2009, 2:42 am

Can't wait on the next :D !!

Reply Saiyaness28, September 19th, 2009, 9:53 am

^^ Lovely! She's so cute and he kind of reminds me of a puppy in that third panel. :D

Reply Ekko (Guest), September 20th, 2009, 3:37 pm

I keep clicking the next button.... but.... but...


so wonderful.

Reply Kaigal (Guest), September 21st, 2009, 4:34 pm

LMAO this and the other two pages put a smile on my face today.

Reply Dionysus (Guest), September 21st, 2009, 9:59 pm

I looooove ur comics!! they are amazing!! im a huge fan of greek mythology and i love your take on the gods. WAAAAAAY cool. u should do a family portrait of the olympians (i might commission u when i get the money LOL) TEN THUMBS UP!!!!

Reply Rennim, September 22nd, 2009, 8:13 pm

third panel = so cute!!!

Reply Renmiu, September 23rd, 2009, 3:44 pm

need updates @____@
must read more! ='{

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