A Promise II: pg 145

November 17th, 2012, 7:57 am

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Reply apollo lover (Guest), November 18th, 2012, 5:15 pm

first juj :P Hahaha zeus doe not look happy with his bolt he looks like 'great a peace of trash this won't do any good'

Reply Guest, November 20th, 2012, 10:52 pm

These last few pages have been especially beautiful!

Also, I believe in the first bubble it should be "definitely" :)

Reply Galadan (Guest), July 30th, 2017, 3:35 pm

Grammar error: In the second-to-last bubble, you're missing a "the" before "cyclopes'".

You might also want the adverb "extraordinarily" instead of the adjective "extraordinary", although that is a matter of stylistic choice (and semantics) rather than an error.

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