A Promise II: pg 27

January 12th, 2012, 8:27 am

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Reply zelda99, January 10th, 2012, 9:47 pm

Dialogue If something sounds particularly strange/awkward/doesn't make sense/etc...
please point it out so I can look into it. Many times I have certain things I want the characters to express but may end up lost due to awkward grammar/word choice etc... Orz
Thanks for the help!!

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Reply littletrinks, January 12th, 2012, 10:55 am

I think this page is fine grammar wise, although it was confusing until I went back and read it with the previous page.

BTW, Cronus gives me the creeps.

Reply FireBorg, January 12th, 2012, 11:35 am

Yeah Cronus gives me the creeps too. .__.

Reply Vyanni Krace (Guest), January 12th, 2012, 11:41 am

Man Cronus is SUCH a creep...*Shudders.*

Reply Andromeda Lazuli, January 12th, 2012, 12:42 pm

*raises hand* I agree with everyone that says that Cronus is CREEPY!!! >.>

Reply Hokova, January 12th, 2012, 2:06 pm

Did you know that thanks to your comics I'll pass my History of Art Culture tests better?
We have to learn all the main titans and gods of greek mythology, relationships and powers etc.
This was a GREAT help so far!

Reply elle (Guest), January 12th, 2012, 8:01 pm

Cronus's eyes look like hes going to eat your soul...

Reply dragonlegends, January 12th, 2012, 8:05 pm

Cronus's eyes look so hot.

Reply MoonArcher (Guest), January 13th, 2012, 6:32 am

Raising hand Cronus is awesome scary.

Reply Mizu_Hi (Guest), January 31st, 2012, 8:28 am

For Kratos' dialogue, I think "I'm no(t) a coward!" is better

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