A Promise II: pg 24

January 5th, 2012, 10:43 am

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Reply zelda99, January 6th, 2012, 1:12 am

edit... I admit I'm rather poor at writing good dialogues (trying my best to make my dear character not sound cheesy while talking, because it REALLY reflects their personalities) My sister said it sounded awkward/strange/weird to have Hades and "...it's okay". I didn't even notice that I made him say that...XD (was probably half asleep) and so...yes, I edited it.

So, in addition to catching grammar/spelling errors, if you find anything sounding "really" out of place (or out of character) let me know and I'll take another look at it and reconsider their dialogues.

Thanks for the help~^__^

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Reply contradiction123, January 5th, 2012, 10:59 am

I don`t have anything to say, but, Zeus looks so cue!

Reply crazylupus, January 5th, 2012, 11:28 am

I really like your comic.
Such delicate and your style is fantastic. *o*

Reply Andromeda Lazuli, January 5th, 2012, 12:15 pm

Why couldn't Zeus stay with this younger personality? Then there wouldn't be a fight between him and Hades... But no matter what, Hades is STILL the most smexiest god in this comic!!! <3

Reply raishe, January 5th, 2012, 1:08 pm

@shadowknightpaladin: You are not the only one! Zeus is lucky and doesn't even fully realize it.

Reply Lycatel, January 5th, 2012, 2:24 pm

Very beautiful art style... nice comic :D

Reply Nakirereneetaisho, January 5th, 2012, 5:58 pm

Gods....Hades is the best big brother in the cosmos!

Reply FireBorg, January 6th, 2012, 10:43 pm

@MoonArcher:

But I have the feeling that that's what will mess Zeus up. D=

Anyhow, I claim Hades as mine from this point, to all ETERNITY !

Reply MeMyselfAndI (Guest), January 8th, 2012, 5:41 pm

Does Hades know that they slept together?
Is that what he wants to talk about?
I know it's not such a huge deal with the Greek Gods, but Hades seems like the protective-older-brother type....

Reply MoonArcher (Guest), January 10th, 2012, 10:21 am

Hades will always be the awesome one.

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