A Promise II: pg 23

January 3rd, 2012, 8:38 am

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Reply ilovecandy (Guest), January 3rd, 2012, 8:46 am

i really hate suspense...

Reply contradiction123, January 3rd, 2012, 9:20 am

Oooooo suspense!

Reply Derp-a-herp, January 3rd, 2012, 10:24 am

akfllfhsl;';sdk I wanna read moooore xD

Reply FireBorg, January 3rd, 2012, 1:38 pm

Oh no Gaia, release Zeus !! D=

Reply MoonArcher (Guest), January 4th, 2012, 10:18 am

Aw let Gaia have Zeus. He's just going to grow up to be a jerk and playboy anyway.

Reply Waterbliss, January 4th, 2012, 12:48 pm

Oooh I wonder if well actually see Gaia. ;3

Reply anne-demonangel (Guest), January 5th, 2012, 4:03 am

from some odd feeling
i hope i'm wrong and that Gaia won't rape Zeus and turn him into the smex fiend he is in the future.

but there are gonna be some changes aren't they?

Reply Muffin (Guest), January 6th, 2012, 11:34 pm

Great page! The story's coming along really well! Can't wait to see what happens.

Um, when Metis says "He got summoned by her to another place..." it sounds sorta awkward. I dunno, but "He was summoned to another place" might fit in better?

Either way, I love the story and I can't wait to see how it turns out~!

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